MY NAME IS BERTA
A voice spoke above the clouds: "She must hate her...". And another voice replied: "Then let us hit her."
After fifteen days of being "the new girl" in Third B at the Don Bosco Catholic School, Dorita suspected that her new classmates did not like her, and she was not mistaken. Since they had to complete a group project for the economics workshop, the teacher decided to place her directly into the group of the class leaders. They were sharp, sarcastic, ironic, extremely quick-witted, and extroverted; she was the perfect antithesis: naive, circumspect, and slow to catch the rhythm of the big city. She came from the countryside and was "the new girl" arriving in the middle of the school year, right when it was popular among teenagers to tell anyone who made a mistake: "Are you from the countryside, or were you born yesterday?". So, every time they said it now, they would add: "Are you from the countryside... like Dorita... or were you born yesterday?". Everyone would laugh, and she would smile timidly but happily, because at least she felt a little more integrated.
It was because of this very innocence that she had a terrible idea: inviting her entire group over for afternoon tea on Friday, since it was a national holiday and they could start preparing the project. They were Liliana, Inés, Cecilia, Ivana, Fernanda, Ema, and Carlota—the latter being the most rebellious of them all. Eva, Dora’s mother, was even sweeter than her daughter; she had followed her husband from the countryside to the city in the middle of the year by decision of the boss, who promoted him from foreman of the laborers to butler of the city house. Eva agreed to her daughter's request to invite the group over for tea and to work on the project. But when the delay reached 45 minutes, Dora began to suspect the worst: they weren't coming. Already sweating from the stress, the doorbell rang. It was them. They had lost track of time at Carlota's house, as they had all gathered there first to travel toward Dora's place, almost on the outskirts of the city.
—I thought you weren't coming anymore? —said the super-smiling Dora.
—That is impossible —Carlota replied.
—What is? That we wouldn't come?
—No! That you would think! —They burst into laughter, and Carlota high-fived Ivana.
—My mom and I made tortas fritas for you.
—What? Tortas fritas? But did you fry them in oil or pig fat?
—No! She melted candles to fry them —Ivana added—. To make them more filling.
—More than tortas fritas, they were crayons —Carlota added amidst laughter.
—You’ll see if you can resist eating them once you lay eyes on them.
Dora told them they would set up in the backyard, under the apple tree, where she had set up the camping table to make them more comfortable. Dora stepped away to grab the tortas fritas and returned, but not before being criticized from head to toe; neither the dog nor the apple tree escaped their judgment. They complained that she was dressed as if going to a party, that she spoke too low and too slow, that the house was too small, that her mother kissed too much, and that her father was too serious. They argued that doing the project in the yard was a bad idea in case it rained, that there was a smell of fried food in the house that might stick to their clothes, and that there was a bad smell in the yard, blaming it on a fart from the sleeping dog. And they said everything while mimicking Dora's particular accent.
Ivana commented:
—This rotten apple tree could have ripe apples, but no! They are greener than Dora.
And Carlota added, euphoric:
—I know! We could start an apple war and all of us can bombard this idiot just to wake her up a bit.
She plucked one and threw it with all her strength toward the back of the yard.
—My tortas fritas are very light —Dora said, presenting the platter in front of Carlota.
Who had no better idea than to say:
—Let's see if they are so light that they fly.
And she hit the tray from underneath with all her strength, sending all 24 pastries flying through the air, including the platter. Everyone roared with laughter, and Carlota shouted, grabbing the platter:
—Quick, gather them up! Five-second rule, no bacteria!
While laughing hysterically, they gathered the pastries from the lawn, completely blind to the fact that Dora stood frozen by the cruel prank.
—Don't be like that, Dorita, we're still going to swallow the crayons... I mean... the tortas fritas. Look —said Carlota, who took a bite and exclaimed—: It's good, but it needs more grass.
When everything was finally cleaned up, Dora said in a low voice:
—I'll go get the teapot and the cups.
She endured the mockery thinking that by the end of the day, everything would be fine. Carlota, beyond simply disliking Dora for her simplicity, had a personal reason: she had wanted to host the group's first meeting at her own house, and Dora had taken away her spotlight; she had taken it entirely personal.
When Dora arrived with the platter, the teapot, and the porcelain cups, Carlota was standing away from the table with an apple in her hand. She winked at Ivana and said:
—Catch it, Ivana!
And she threw it, hitting Dora right in the center of her head. Losing her balance, Dora dropped the platter with the cups onto the tortas fritas with such force that it shook the camping table, and everything crashed to the ground. The dog woke up, barked, and lunged with mouth and paws at the pastries. Dora couldn't hold it in any longer, and tears streamed from her eyes.
—I better go —said Ivana, turning as red as a tomato.
—Me too —the others said in unison.
Carlota laughed secretly, but the joke had turned sour even for them.
—You went too far —Ivana told her.
—That's why let's get the hell out of here —she replied.
They didn't even say goodbye to the mother, who found it strange that they left in such absolute silence. Only Liliana stayed behind to help tidy up, but when the mother arrived, she withdrew, saying softly:
—Goodbye, Dora, see you around.
—See you —Dora replied, inaudible.
Eva asked, disoriented upon seeing the disaster:
—But what happened here?
Dora hugged her and burst into tears, saying:
—What happened is that they don't like me.
They were left alone in the yard, gathering the old teapot, a keepsake from her grandmother. Her heart had ended up just like that teapot. Her intuition was true: her classmates did not like her. Such an aspect of human nature was unthinkable not only to Dora, but even to Eva at her 50 years of age.
—They don't like me —she repeated.
—Don't worry, I love you. And love is always love. If you want, I can switch your school shift, we'll think about it, okay? —she said, hugging her, calming her down.
The next day, Saturday, she had to attend catechism class, as she was preparing to receive her Confirmation. Since her father drove her, he had to drop her off at the school 15 minutes early.
Above the clouds, a voice said: "She must reject her." "She is going to reject her," another voice replied. "But now it is our turn to play our hand," said a third voice.
Because of those 15 extra minutes, Dora agreed to the routine insistence on conversation that "Oli" offered every Saturday to everyone. Oli's name was Berta; she was a 20-year-old woman, and they called her that short for "oligophrenic," as she suffered from a mild mental disability. But Dora didn't know that. Every year, Berta took her Confirmation classes, but she never went to the corresponding Mass to confirm her faith. She only did it to kill time on Saturdays, to socialize, and to be around someone. Everyone else avoided her without the slightest delicacy.
—Hello, how are you? You arrived early —she said to Dora.
—Yes, my dad had to drop me off early.
—Do you want one? —she said, holding out a paper package. Dora opened it to discover golden, crispy tortas fritas. Dora's shyness wouldn't let her refuse, so she took one—. Thank you, Oli.
—You're welcome, but my name isn't Oli.
—No? Aren't you Olivia?
—No —she said, adjusting her glasses, which were a bit too big for her.
—What is your name?
—Me? My name is Berta. And yours?
—Dora...
—No! Like my mom who is in heaven! My mom on earth is named Tita, who is my aunt.
—And Berta is my mom's middle name —Dora told her, accepting a second pastry and offering her a small juice box she had in her backpack.
Berta helped Dora with her school homework or the household chores her aunt assigned her, like mopping the yard or the entryway. Berta told her that her aunt forced her to leave the house after lunch so she could clean in peace, meaning she had to wander across the entire city until 5:00 PM, when she could finally return, have tea, stay for dinner, and sleep, only to repeat the same routine the next day.
She went to the market, the club, the fire station, the shopping mall, and on Saturdays, it was the turn for the perpetual Confirmation class. In some places, they loved her more than in others, but she loved everyone equally. That day, Berta sat with Dora, and together they worked on the question-and-answer workshop. After a brief observation, Dora discovered that Berta was the exact opposite of her coarse and rugged appearance: she was deeply sweet, respectful, and delicate. At the end of the class, Berta accompanied her to the entryway of her house, and when Dora saw that it was four o'clock—meaning Berta still had an hour left before she could go home—she invited her in for afternoon tea. Berta accepted happily. But Dora was even happier, because being with Berta made her forget the sad episode with her classmates; the contrast was so polar that Berta felt like a warm, loving sun.
The next day they met at morning Mass, where Eva met Tita. Berta told her that there would be free painting classes in the park organized by the Cultural Center. Dora asked her mother for permission to attend, and it was granted. There, both girls had the exact same idea: to gift their practical artwork to their friend. Dora drew a radiant sun and wrote in the center: "For Berta." And Berta drew a pink sun over sea-green. They exchanged gifts, intertwined their hearts, and thus their friendship was born.
The next day, back in class, her classmates expected a sad, eclipsed, and inhibited Dora, but she was quite the contrary: she was radiant, happy, as if nothing had ever happened. A special gleam could still be perceived in her eyes. She even performed a very funny gag that made the whole class laugh. It turned out that the teacher was walking into the classroom with a pile of folders in her arms, and the eraser fell from the very top; Dora, who was nearby, instinctively tapped it with her elbow, making it land perfectly back in its place, and added:
—Ha, the girl from the countryside!
Everyone laughed except Carlota, who arched her eyebrows. During recess, she couldn't take it anymore, approached her, and asked bluntly:
—Did you get a boyfriend?
Dora laughed and simply replied:
—No.
Just then, her mother surprised her, hugged her, and led her away, saying:
—Come on, Dora, let's go home.
They went together to gather her supplies from the classroom. Eva explained:
—I spoke with the principal and she allowed me to switch your school shift, so you start this afternoon.
—Then I can take the painting classes at the Cultural Center with Berta, because those are in the morning!
—You can! —her mother replied. And they walked away.
Dora and Berta spent every single day together. They would make crafts, dress up, or arrange picnics in the yard where they only ate the apples—which were finally ripe now—and later Berta would take some apples to her aunt and uncle as a gift. They also went together to buy groceries or run errands downtown. Dora loved putting makeup on Berta, and when Berta returned home, her aunt would always make the same joke: "There she is, painted like a door."
That year, Berta did take her Confirmation, and Dora gifted her a t-shirt that read: "My name is Berta," after discovering that "oligophrenic" is an obsolete term considered highly derogatory. Berta found in Dora her ideal friend-leader; their friendship was like touching heaven with their hands, and Dora considered Berta her good-luck star: an inexhaustible source of love and human warmth. The love of friendship was the triangle of life where both found a refuge as comfortable as heaven itself. And it all happened by opening up, allowing, leaving the past behind, and being free despite the circumstances.
In her new school shift, she had no trouble at all with her new classmates and even established herself as a leader. Later came Liliana, who also switched shifts due to a poor relationship with Carlota and to take the painting classes, since painting was her absolute passion. Dora formed a friendship with her too, and the three of them went everywhere together. They even went to Berta's house, as her aunt now allowed her to stay while she cleaned, under the condition that they remain in one spot. Later they learned that Carlota no longer attended Don Bosco, as her parents' work requirements forced her to move to another city.
Seeing them arrive one afternoon, Eva exclaimed:
—Here comes the painting group: LI-BERTA-DORA! —she said, pointing to each respectively.
The four of them hugged and laughed at the clever phrase.
—How did you think of that? —Dora asked her.
—An angel told me —she responded quickly. And she added, throwing her voice: —The angel of goodness.
Without knowing she was channeling, she also didn't know that the angel of evil was furious because he had failed, utterly defeated by the love of Dora and Berta.
THE END
📝 Literary & Thematic Analysis: The Invisible Architecture of "My Name Is Berta"
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- The Symmetrical Justice of the Journey: The story operates on a profound karmic mirror. Carlota uses her established social dominance to humiliate Dora for being "the outsider" uprooted by her father’s job. In a flawless twist of poetic justice, the universe removes Carlota through the exact same mechanism: her parents' shifting employment forces her to leave her kingdom and become "the new girl" elsewhere. The narrative does not punish Carlota with violence; it simply forces her to walk in Dora's shoes.
- The Metamorphosis of the Apple Tree: The apple tree acts as a living barometer for Dora's emotional reality. At the beginning, the apples are "green"—unripe, sour, and weaponized by the bullies to symbolize vulnerability and social immaturity. By the end, when Dora and Berta host their peaceful picnics, the fruits are "ripe." This shift beautifully reflects human growth; what was once a site of trauma under the green tree transforms into a harvest of sweet, protective, and mature friendship.
- The Resonance of Choice (The Subplot of the Clouds): The overarching theme of the story lies within the choices made under the gaze of the celestial voices. The spiritual entities do not dictate human actions; they merely bet on human free will. The Angel of Evil counts on Dora falling into the frequencies of hatred (toward Carlota) or rejection (toward Berta’s condition). By resisting the urge to hate and actively choosing to open her heart to Berta, Dora breaks the cycle of malice. This internal shift triggers a cosmic realignment: the toxic element (Carlota) is effortlessly repelled from her reality, while the harmonious elements (Liliana and art classes) are magnetic forces drawn directly into her life.
- The Reclamation of Identity: The t-shirt reading "My Name Is Berta" serves as a profound act of emotional restoration. It strips away the clinical, weaponized label assigned by a cruel local vocabulary ("Oli") and restores individual dignity. The final acrostic created by the mother—LI (Liliana), BERTA, DORA—elevates the text from a simple school yard drama to a triumphant anthem of absolute liberation.
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Goodbye, LI-BERTA-DORA! Until our next story of goodness! ✨
